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Poem from a while ago - Edge a poem i wrote when i was really depressed ..

#1 User is offline   Naomi B 

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Posted 26 December 2009 - 07:56 PM

Eternal cries burried & deepend in her breaking soul
Her heart screams out in agony to be free'd from the crushing torture
The feeling of joy , has burned down and finished like a candle
although she attempts to adore the excitement of living
it seems like she will never succeed
Discovers a technique to sooth her soore pain , To contend the torment & To bear down the ache
In the end all she can accomplish is to hope
Hope for sunshine , Hope for Delight , Hope to achieve.
Until then she will have to hide the horrible illusion of herself.
Hide the Horrifying disaster, the person she seems to create within
The person she refers to as her image & the person she despises increasingly as days go by
she strives to find this unknown being , that envision that breakes her from the inside.
By the breaking dawn she prays with faith that it will al be diffrent than the day before
& Every breaking dawn she witnesses the eternel cries burried & deepend in her breaking soul
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Posted 27 December 2009 - 12:01 AM

Naomi, I sincerely hope and pray you are doing better now. Keep your hope in the Lord, don't give up! God bless you and give you peace....His wonderful peace and comfort. He is there for you and loves you.
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Posted 02 January 2010 - 03:41 AM

Naomi,

Happy New Year to you, precious child of GOD.

The poem you wrote is very deep and expresses how you felt at that time. It is good that you wrote this down because someday this will be your testimony to others about how GOD delivers people, no matter how hopeless a situation may seem.

Just the other day I purchased a small booklet and everyday I record in this booklet, scripture that comforts and encourages. I also stand on the many promises of GOD because His word never lies. So anytime, wherever I am, when I feel sad or discouraged or even happy, His precious word is what I choose to feed off. I am here to encourage you to do the same, Naomi. Feed on GODS word and allow Him to heal you completely. The following well known scripture literally flowed out of my mouth at a time when I felt like laying down to die. It is GODS encouragement for you today and I have placed it under the heading 'Eternal life through Christ';

"FOR GOD SO LOVED THE WORLD THAT HE GAVE HIS ONE AND ONLY SON, THAT WHOEVER BELIEVES IN HIM SHALL NOT PERSIH BUT HAVE ETERNAL LIFE" John 3:16

What an absolutely wonderful promise from GOD!

Plse share with us how you spent your Christmas and New Year so far.

GOD bless you Naomi
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